((i read this one written like this basic format and have tested it outt what do you think?))
P
(some lost
some stolen in the stomach of a whale,
because of my racism-
against myself-
whom shall i go to now)
ieces
W
(always, always
dont you see this now?
The weight of these heavy words,
as i sit here, as i shudder")
aiting
R
(only He can do this
and do it fully,
to Him i hold these shards up to
and being patient-as He
molds them back together..
You're holding me together)
epairs
-Brittany 3/28/09 on the way up to TN during sprang break
((...what do you think of this formatt and of course the poem itself love..?))
2 comments:
I like both the format and the content. bravo!
be cooler if the words spelled something
pieces waiting repairs
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